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Hindi Translated Poems – 1

By BSM Murty

            The Joohi Bud

Suryakant Tripathi ‘Nirala’

Indolent, on a lonesome woodland bine

Lay lapped in leafy bowers – in wedded bliss –

lost in dreams of love-

A snow-fresh, soft, sweet maid – the Joohi bud:

Its eyelids sealed.

        ‘Twas vernal night time.

          Loitering in some land remote

        Was the lonely Breeze, love-lorn, forlorn

        - the Breeze they call the Malaya.

        Memories surged up,

        Of that sweet murmur in reunion,

        Of the moon-laved midnight,

        Of the tremulous, lovely limbs of his love.

And lo, the Breeze – over lakes and groves and brooks

And sylvan mounts and tangles of vines and bushes,

- He came bouncing, and made love to the blossomed bud.

And she lay slumbering, unaware, naturally, of her lover’s

breath.

        He pressed a kiss on her cheek

        And the whole bine-curl swung and quivered,

        Still she awoke not nor sought excuse

        Nor oped her sleep-flushed eyes.

        An air of indolence and languor…!

        Drugged - was she? – with the wine of youth.

Wantonly unkind, he was hard, oh, too hard on her –

Shook up amain with fitful gusts

The dainty petite frame,

Pinched, too, her plump cheeks.

        Startled, the maid rolled her bewildered eyes

        And espying her spouse in bed (or hard by)

        She chuckled, her chin dipped and nestled,

        And bloomed afresh in hue of love.

             Seadusk

 Nalin Vilochan Sharma

 Dunes of sand like cats curled asleep,

The waves lapping-playing on their paws.

Cloudlambs grazing sun’s greensward

Dauntless, unamazed.

        I walking in an infinite void –

        A vagrant point on the yellow sands –

        Across the eternal triangle

        Of sky, earth, and the shoreless sea.

As the backwash of my voyage

Are visible only : cigarette-smoke

Trailing on the wind; on the sands,

A number of footprints

To be full when the waves will sweep them over.

             They call him Jayprakash

 Ramdhari Singh ‘Dinkar’

 The lulled storm, the hushed gale,

The sea waves dashed on the shores,

But all their might echoes aloud

Even now in your robust roars.

        The foot of the mountain shook awhile,

        The sea waves ebbed from the shore.

        But in the nations hands were bestowed

        A brand new lusty sword.

Victory come to Bharat’s new sword

O soldier of a new country.

Victory, O new fire, O new flame.

Victory to the archer of the bull’s eye.

        Welcome O trampler of the Time Serpent

        Who ride on its fanned out hood.

        Welcome O priest ready to jump

        And burn in the holy fire as its food.

You hold the nation’s future in your fist

With a mighty roar in your throat,

Descending from the mind you hold in your hand

A world in which your dreams float.

        O soldier give your salute to the future

        As history heralds your coming.

        The planets in the darkest sky burn out

        With you the sky starts glowing.

The new effulgence formless and abstract

Has found its tangible form in you.

The fire that you swallowed and ingested fearlessly

Has turned into a glowing ember true.

        The winds of our country get hot and hotter

        By the countless breaths exhaled,

        While the shadow skimming the Ganga waters

        Sets it ablaze in its trail.

You are the diamond disgorged by revolution

Like a she-serpent at the mouth foaming,

Which the Mother gathered as a precious gift

As she went about searching and roaming.

        You came back to your land as an icon

        Of sacrifices made into the holy fire;

        And now that name ‘Jayprakash’ rings loud

        From the ardent unshakable youth’s choir.

They call him ‘Jayprakash’ or ‘Victory be to light’!

He is one who always defies death,

And leaps undaunted into the midst of fire

When he finds it dwindling in the youth’s breath.

        Jayprakash is the one and only name

        Whom no power can ever restrain

        Holding aloft a burning beacon in darkness

        Spreading light, like a hurricane!

Jayprakash is he who gives feet to the lame,

He is the one who gives voice to the dumb.

It is Jayprakash who embodies the hope

Of the country’s freedom soon to come.

        Yea, Jayprakash is truly the name

        Of turning time, and time’s tide;

        Of the earth-shaking youth’s pledges

        With their hurricane power and pride.

Jayprakash is the name, aye

Who is revered by the annals of history,

Seeking fervently to get his footprints

To record their enigma, their mystery.

        The wise offer their obeisance to him

        And the brave sacrifice their lives.

        The singer sings him songs of praise

        And to enkindle his voice he strives.

The poet’s talent, his fervent imagination

Glows and takes flight on its wings.

The tide of imagination roars and rolls

On the shores of humanity it sings.

        O hear, hear, the future is calling

        The saviour of the downtrodden many.

        Jayprakash is the dreamer of dreams,

        The maker of our country’s destiny.

             The Boatman

 Ram Gopal Sharma ‘Rudra’

 Brother, I must return home,

Please take me on your boat.

I got delayed in the market,

In all that haggling and purchase;

It was a luminous mirror

Which caught me in its spell:

But, poor me, its price I could not pay.

Was it not sheer craziness on my part,

With just a cowrie in my purse,

To hang around near shops

Selling the finest cosmetic fripperies!

Who’d care for a pauper like me?

I suffered silently the salt on my wound.

I won’t be much of a burden for your boat,

Poor I am but I’ll give you all my love,

Will sing you the songs of Meera and Soor,

And pay you the few coins that I get.

I put my head on your feet; have mercy.

O Brother, I must return home,

Please take me on your boat.

                                        Notes on the poems

 The Juhi Bud : SuryakantTripathi ‘Nirala’ (1899-1961)

is perhaps the greatest among modern Hindi poets, the

leading light of the “Chhayavad School” of modern Hindi

poetry. Joohi ki kali , written in 1918, is his earliest poem,

embodying the true romantic spirit of the resurgent poetic

mode. It was published in his second volume of poems

Parimal (1929). This translation first published in Hindi (Jan-

Mar, 2011).

 Sea-dusk : NalinVilochan Sharma (1916-1961),

Professor of Hindi at Patna University and a renowned

Hindi poet and critic. He led a small group of poets, during

the 1960s, who professed a manifesto of a new strain of

experimental poetry called “Nakenvad” formed from the

initial letters of their names: Nalin, Kesari and Naresh,

during the 1960s. This poem is a typical example of that

school of poetry. This translation first published in Hindi (Jan-

Mar, 2011).

 They call him Jayprakash : Ramdhari Singh ‘Dinkar’s

(1908-1974) Hindi poem ‘Kahte Hain Usko Jayprakash’,

recited by the poet himself in a public reception accorded

to Shri Jayprakash Narayan in Gandhi Maidan, Patna, on

April 21, 1946, after his release from imprisonment.

This translation first published in Indian Literature (Nov-

Dec,2011)

 The Boatman :  Shri Ramgopal Sharma ‘Rudra’ 

(1 Nov 1912 – 19 Aug 1991), a lesser  known poet 

from Bihar, who had taught me as a Hindi

teacher in a Patna Collegiate school to whose memory 

this translation is published as a humble tribute. 

Shri  ‘Rudra’ worked as a translator in the Bihar State Rajbhasha

Department. He was better known in the literary circle in

Bihar and as one who could draw tears by singing his poems

in public poetic meets, in a melodious voice. His poetry is

rich in textural quality, and marked by an intense lyricality.

He died a tragic death by getting entangled in a roadside

live electric wire as he was returning home on his bicycle

on a dark rainy night.

 [These translated Hindi poems are published in my collection of poems TWO-WAY MIRROR (2020, available on Amazon.in). Some more Hindi translated poems from that book, plus some newer translated ones, can be read in this series on this blog in two or three such weekly posts. Comments are welcome.]   

 CONTENTS ON THIS BLOG    (Type title in SEARCH)

 [2019]  July 4 : My 40 English poems / Aug 12 : My Hindi poems

 [2020] July 20 : Poetry Challenge Chain / Nov 12 : POETRAMA Notes on poetry  

Nov 15 : POETICA-1 The Magic of Poetry / Nov 21: POETICA-2 Poem as Story

Nov28 : POETICA -3 Poetry & Punctuation / Dec 6 : POETICA -4  Poetry & Punctuation – 2

Dec 12 : POETICA -5 Rhyme or Reason / Dec 20 : POETICA -6 Poetry & Image

Dec 26 : POETICA – 7 Poetry & Image -2

 [2021] Jan 2 : POETICA -8 Poetry & Translation / Jan 9 : POETICA -9 Poetry & Translation -2

Mar 7: POETICA -10 Poetry & Sonnets / Jun 15 : POETICA 11- Poetry & Prosody

Jun 20 : Tom Graves: Review of Two-Way Mirror / Jul 22 : Shadow Sonnets : Keats

 [2023] Sep 7 : My book: My Garden of Sonnets

 [2024] 20 Apr : Review of HHouse: Tom /13 May : Broken Mirror Nirala/

 [2025] 23 Mar : Cummings: Love Poems /6 Apr: I am a Woman First (Tr. Hindi Short stories)

11 July : Creativity & Translation / 20 Aug :  Sonnet in a Bonnet

10 Dec : Night Train to Varanasi (Excerpt fr novel by Sean Doyle)

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  1. I must record here the fact that the poem by composed on an occasion where I was present. Nalinji was my teacher & co-editor with my father Shivpoojan Sahay of the hindi literary quarterly SAHITYA published during the 50s in Patna. I was a 14 year old child studying in school. My father, Nalinji and some others in their literary circle went on a picnic on a midstream sand-island. There were two other children of my age, too. we were playing and running about on the sand. It was then I noticed Nalinji wandering alone smoking his cigarett, deep in thought. I couldn't have guessed that a poem was being conceived by Nalinji while he walked randomly on the sand-bank. Much later when I read the poem published in a 'Naken' anthology of imagist poetry, I could instantly recall that sequence of the picnic. It's only I that have been witness to the actual conception of the poem - of the real-time creative event - a unigue serendipitous chance of witnessing the actual creation of a poem. I have met no other instance of such a rare coincidence in any account of the composition of a poem by its reader. And that also fired my imagination while translating the poem. It's a truly serendipitous and solitary story of a poet, his poem and its reader being together in one place and at the same moment as the poem was germinating in the poet's imagination.

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